Battle rap is healthy for hip hop. The entire battle scene, the way that it’s thriving right now and how big it’s becoming and everything—it’s great. There’s something to be said about two guys, facing each other and squaring off. But if you take any of those raps and put them on a record, that turns into fighting, for some reason.
If I’m battling somebody, I go into the battle knowing that. This person’s gonna say foul shit about me. But when somebody calls somebody out on a record, it’s different. In a battle, people expect it. (Source)
So put my tape back on the rack
Go run and tell your friends my shit is wack
Stan
And even if I could it'd all be gray
But your picture on my wall
It reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad
When I heard “your picture on my wall,” I was like “Yo, this could be about somebody who takes me too seriously.” So I knew what I was going to write about before I wrote it. A lot of times when I’m writing songs, I see visions for everything I’m writing. This was one of those. (Source)
The hook was the first phrase I thought of when I heard the track. I thought “Okay, this has something to it and might be catchy but — I’m a “rap god”? Why? If I’m going to say that, I need to validate that.”
I don’t want to say it’s the crutch, exactly, but the theme of the whole song is: this is the only thing I know how to do. I don’t know how to do anything else, aside from play a little bit of basketball. (Source)
He and Dre recorded 3-4 songs in 6 hours on their first day working together.
Part of how he learned how to come up with lines that would get a reaction from people was by performing live at open mics.
On stage screamin' like Rage Against the Machine
I'm convinced I'm a fiend
This is exactly what comedians do; it's how they learn what material works and what doesn't.
I slap Linda Ronstadt with a lobster, throw her off a balcony
Just so happens she's fond of algae
Let’s say I’m writing, and I lock onto Linda Ronstadt. I’m in the studio and I chuckle. Someone hears me and is like, “What the fuck are you laughing at?” It’s because I thought of something funny that rhymes with something. I’m not gonna not say this, because it’s funny, regardless of whether or not it’s fucked up. If it happens to connect and there’s some kind of humor in it, some reason for it to rhyme with something else, then I’m going to say it.
When I’m pushing boundaries, I want to make sure that I keep myself in check. I want you to know that this rhyme might be fucked up or funny or not, or whatever. I’m aware of it and I know I’m probably fucked up for saying it.
I don’t think it’s any different than what comedians do. Have you ever seen Lisa Lampanelli? She takes the piss out of herself while she says these ridiculous things. You’re like, “That was fucked up,” and then she comes right behind it with some self-deprecating thing about herself. She’s figured out a way to weave certain things together that’s very clever.
Ungh, school flunky, pill junkie
But look at the accolades these skills brung me
I don’t ever want to be too braggadocious. If I’m going to brag, let me pull it back with lines like “school flunky, pill junkie.” I’m a fucking waste of life. I’m a waste of sperm. I am a fucking outcast of society, I am a piece of shit. But I know how to rap. Other than that, I’m a fucking scumbag. I’m worthless. Or this is what I’ve been told. (Source)
He tries to avoid using a distinctive / rare word in more than one song.
Straw into gold chump, I will spin
Rumpelstiltskin in a haystack
He spends a lot of time trying to create phrases that match both in rhyme and also their rhythm.
Right For Me
Couple of shots of Jäger
Public intoxication, dis-fuckin'-combobulation
Flooded with thoughts of anger
When a phrase hits me, sometimes I start building out from there. Like let’s say it was “fuck with this operation.” The phonics, me and Royce talk about this shit all the time. We sit here and spend so much time connecting all these twenty syllable words and phrases, and most people don’t catch them. They catch the last rhyme, the –ation in operation. They don’t hear that “couple of shots of jager” connects to “operation.” (Source)
What he's referring to is the rhythm. He's saying most people are aware of the end-rhymes, but aren't noticing all the rhythm-matching between phrases.
See, I'm a poet to some, a regular modern-day Shakespeare
Jesus Christ, the king of these Latter-day Saints here
To shatter the picture in which of that as they paint me as
A monger of hate, satanist, scatter-brained atheist
When I’m writing, I’m in the syllable game. I’m connecting 5-6-7-8 syllable phrases where every syllable rhymes. I get heavy into that. When I start rapping something, and I think of more syllables that connect with it, sometimes I want to just keep the scheme going forever.
I’ve done it before in songs, where the syllable scheme of the first verse ends up being the syllable scheme of the second verse, and the third verse — all the way down. I do it because the lines start connecting and making sense. Once I find something and lock in, it comes out pretty quick. (Source)
God only knows, he's grown farther from home, he's no father
He goes home and barely knows his own daughter
Maybe people are just thinking father rhymes with daughter or something. But it’s about repeating a pattern. The trick is to get the pattern to hit on the same beat—“grown farther,” “own daughter,” the “knows” and “goes,” like that. (Source)
God only knows, he's grown farther from home, he's no father
He goes home and barely knows his own daughter
Maybe people are just thinking father rhymes with daughter or something. But it’s about repeating a pattern. The trick is to get the pattern to hit on the same beat—“grown farther,” “own daughter,” the “knows” and “goes,” like that. (Source)
Lose Yourself
Food stamps don't buy diapers, and there's no movie
There's no Mekhi Phifer, this is my life
He will come up with ideas for individual rhymes and store them for later use.
Eminem Interview with 60 Minutes
Anderson Cooper: I've heard you say that you bend the word. Marshall Mathers: Yeah, it's just in the enunciation of it; like, people say that the word "orange" doesn't rhyme with anything, and that kind of pisses me off, because I can think of a lot of things that rhyme with orange. AC: What rhymes with orange? I'm trying to think–I can't think of anything... MM: If you're taking the word at face value and you just say "orange", nothing is going to rhyme with it exactly. If you enunciate it and make it more than one syllable, "o-range", you could say, like, I put my orange four-inch door-hinge in storage and ate porridge with Geor-ridge. You just have to figure out the science to breaking down words. AC: And do you think about this throughout the day? When you're driving along, do you think about rhyming words? MM: Yeah, all day. Yeah, I actually drive myself insane with it. AC: But it's interesting for a guy who hated school, who was in the 9th grade three times, you spend all your time thinking about words. MM: I found that no matter how bad I was at school, and no matter how low my grades might have been at some times, I always was good at English. AC: I heard that you used to read the dictionary. MM: I just felt like, "I want to be able to have all of these words at my disposal, in my vocabulary, at all times, whenever I need to pull 'em out. Somewhere they'll be stored, locked away. AC (Narrating): His words are stored but they're not exactly locked away. He actually keeps them in boxes. AC: You store stuff in just boxes like this. MM: Yes. AC (Narrating): Inside are hundreds of scraps of paper on which he's obsessively scrawled words and phrases. AC: So, wait, this is a pad from a hotel in Paris, it looks like. MM: Yeah. AC: And you just scribbled four little words, scribbled there. MM: Yeah. AC: How do you even read this? This is tiny? MM: I know what it says...I guess. (Looks at pad.) I might use that, actually. AC (Narrating):They're not lyrics, really, they're just ideas that he collects. He calls it "stacking ammo". AC: I've gotten letters from crazy people, and they kind of look like this. MM: Yeah? AC: Sometimes, yeah. They're all in capital letters or they're scrawled on pages like this. MM: Yeah, well, that's probably because I'm crazy. |
He will sometimes create a section of rhymes by starting with a particular phrase he'd like to say, and then figuring out what other words would need to be put in front of and after that phrase to make it connect with earlier and later lines.
Couple of shots of Jäger
Public intoxication, dis-fuckin'-combobulation
Flooded with thoughts of anger
He may rely on the fast-paced drums in the accompaniment to get his timing right. I'm surprised he doesn't use a click-track.
Where's my snare?
I have no snare in my headphones
This was true. I was recording and couldn’t hear the snare, the engineer had it muted for some reason. I left it. (Source)
With Infinite and the SSLP, he was able to perform songs in one take.
One way that they'll create an accompaniment is to start by playing chords on a guitar, and then when he hears something interesting, they'll build out from that.
Lose Yourself
When we were making 8 Mile, I was revisiting this old CD from two years before [NW: so, 1999-2000], going through old loops. I found the “Lose Yourself” demo on this session where me and Jeff Bass were just making beats. Jeff was just sitting on those guitar chords, and then it went into something different. I was just like “Yo, that section, right there, I gotta make a beat out of that.” I recorded the demo version of it the same day I made the beat. I didn’t like the rhyme, and put it off to the side.
But it’s one of those beats I never gave up on. That beat was definitely a highlight of my producing. I ended up doing the new version on the set of the movie, just writing between takes. (Source)
Lose Yourself
8 Mile wasn’t coming out for another year and a half, and Curtis really wanted music for the movie. He wanted it to be created from the environment, so he was pushing me to make stuff. I think “Lose Yourself” was the only thing I worked on specifically for the movie.
We filmed half of it in the dead of winter. We had a music trailer on set, designed like a studio. One trailer was music, and we had another with gym equipment in it.
We were on lunch break, and I needed to finish the track. I don’t think it was one take all the way down, but it was one take each verse. “Got the first verse, okay, punch me in at the second. OK, the whole third verse.” For some reason, I just captured something there that I didn’t want to change. I remember trying to change it and go back and re-do the vocals, and I was like “Yo, let me listen to the old ones? Just keep the old ones, fuck it.” (Source)
D12 - Purple Pills
I been to mushroom mountain once or twice, but who's countin'?
But nothin' compares to these blue and yellow purple pills
Sometimes, a full melody will hit me and the words fall out easily. Other times, I just get a basic idea of a melody and whatever the rhythm is doing, however many syllables it is. Ham-bur-gers. Sometimes it will be the last word that will hit me, and it will be like “Okay, now fill in the blanks.” And sometimes it will just get the beginning phrase, like with “Purple Pills.” I think a lot of that material just came from walking around the studio. We’re just goofballs man. We would just clown. (Source)
My salsa makes all the pretty girls want to dance
My salsa, look out for my next single, it's called My Salsa
My salsa, salsa, salsa, salsa
My salsa makes all the pretty girls want to dance
We would always be in the studio, just goofing. We would walk around the studio just saying dumb shit. We’d say “This thing just popped up in my head, let me go lay it.” So, my band, my salsa. I just said it. (Source)
General Thoughts
Open Mic
Unlike Infinite, The Slim Shady EP helped Eminem garner significant underground attention and eventually garnered the interest of famous West Coast hip-hop producer Dr. Dre, who subsequently signed Eminem to his Aftermath label, and executive-produced his breakthrough major-label debut The Slim Shady LP. Eminem first introduced his "Slim Shady" persona on this EP, and his lyrics are a marked departure from those found on Infinite, featuring constant references to drug use, sexual acts, mental instability, and over-the-top violence. Another departure was his exploration of more serious themes of dealing with poverty, his direct and self-deprecating response to criticism, and of marital and family difficulties. His flow is also noticeably different than on Infinite; whereas critics claimed he sounded too much like Nas and AZ on that album. Eminem also began using story telling on this EP. The production value of the music on the tracks was also noticeably higher than on prior album efforts.
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Eminem desperately tried to contact big producers such as Dr. Dre, (who would later sign Eminem) to do production work on the album but with no luck.
"Raped" is uncensored on the line "Raped the women's swim team", but on the LP it's censored. I read online that when the LP was first coming out it was decided that that was too much.
It's just a little scratch - it don't hurt, her was eatin
dinner while you were sweepin and spilled ketchup on her shirt
General Thoughts
What's the purpose of the little scenes between songs?
Cover Art
This skit sets up 'My Name Is' so, so well.
The main sample:
Ronald Stein - Go Home Pigs - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wD82-bTtwqY&t=0m06s
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shut the hell up
I'm tryna develop these pictures of the Devil to sell 'em
I absolutely love this image, it's maybe my favorite line in the song.
Blood, guts, guns, cuts
Knives, lives, wives, nuns, sluts
Great sequence.
Hey, Slim, I drank a fifth of vodka, you dare me to drive?
You know the song by Phil Collins, "In the Air of the Night"
About that guy who coulda saved that other guy from drownin'
But didn't, then Phil saw it all, then at a show he found him?
I don't got that bad of a mouth, do I?
Fuck! Shit! Ass! Bitch! Cunt! Shooby-de-doo-wop!
Skibbedy-be-bop, a Christopher Reeve
Funny lines.
How many retards'll listen to me
And run up in the school shootin' when they're pissed at a tea
-cher? Her? Him? Is it you? Is it them?
The 'tea – cher' split isn't nice.
When a dude's getting bullied and shoots up his school
And they blame it on Marilyn and the heroin
Where were the parents at? And look where it's at!
Middle America, now it's a tragedy
Now it's so sad to see
Great lines.
Will Smith don't gotta cuss in his raps to sell records
Well, I do, so fuck him and fuck you too!
Great lines.
And there's a million of us just like me
Who cuss like me, who just don't give a fuck like me
Who dress like me; walk, talk, and act like me
And just might be the next best thing, but not quite me
The flow here is great.
The entire third verse is incredible:
I'm like a head trip to listen to, ‘cause I'm only givin' you
Things you joke about with your friends inside your livin' room
The only difference is I got the balls to say it in front of y'all
And I don't gotta be false or sugarcoat it at all
I just get on the mic and spit it
And whether you like to admit it, I just shit it
Better than 90% of you rappers out can
Then you wonder: "How can
Kids eat up these albums like Valiums?"
It's funny, ‘cause at the rate I'm going, when I'm 30
I'll be the only person in the nursing home flirting
Pinching nurse's asses when I'm jacking off with Jergens
And I'm jerking, but this whole bag of Viagra isn't working
And every single person is a Slim Shady lurking
He could be working at Burger King, spittin' on your onion rings
Or in the parking lot, circling, screaming, "I don't give a fuck!"
With his windows down and his system up
So will the real Shady please stand up
And put one of those fingers on each hand up?
And be proud to be outta your mind and outta control
And one more time, loud as you can, how does it go?
Come on, relax, guy! I like gay men
Right, Ken? Give me an amen!
Em speaking as Em with the Cartman voice...
The chorus is one of the best in any Eminem song:
I'm a criminal! ‘Cause every time I write a rhyme
These people think it's a crime
To tell 'em what's on my mind
I guess I'm a criminal! But I don't got to say a word
I just flip 'em the bird and keep going
I don't take shit from no one; I'm a criminal!
If I ever gave a fuck, I'd shave my nuts
Tuck my dick in between my legs and cluck
Very well-delivered.
Jeff Bass is considered one of the most influential people in Eminem's career.
Most of Eminem's hit singles have been either produced by Dre ("My Name Is", "The Real Slim Shady", and "Just Lose It") or Jeff Bass ("Without Me", "Beautiful" and "Lose Yourself").
Both have won Grammy Awards for their work with Eminem. Jeff Bass won an Best Original Song Oscar in 2003 for co-writing "Lose Yourself" from the film 8 Mile.