A Response to 'Industrial Society and Its Future'

I remember reading this in high school when I was up late the night before some major paper was due.
At the time I was blown away by how well-structured and clear the writing was. I thought it was extremely well-written.
I still think it's better-written than most writing out there. I have learned that mathematicians often write very well-structured prose because of their experience writing mathematical proofs. Timothy Gowers is another example of a mathematician who I found to write some brilliant prose.
I also now see ways in which this manifesto could have been written better.